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Two Lives (A Two-Voiced Poem)

3/13/2017

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Carol Ann                                                                       Kathy
 Sisters
 The first two of fourteen
First born                                                                        Second born
  Siblings bounced on both their hips
Career Woman                                                               Stay-at-home mom
No children                                                                     Three children Nun                                                                        College Student
Teacher                                                                           Volunteer
TV Anchorwoman                                                           Tennis player
A Run for Congress                                                        World Traveler
PhD from Trinity College                                                Business Spouse

When she shunned college for the convent                   She snuck outside the abbey,
she yearned for news about her family.                          and whispered while she swept.
Worried about the brother born premature.                    Delivering the latest news.
Breaking her vow of silence.                                           Sinning.
 
 A year apart in age,
 a lifetime apart in interests.
  Two lives diverging since childhood,
 constantly compared.
  And now they're back together,
    taking care of their mother.
 One last babysitting assignment.
        Seventy years later.
 
Aunt                                                                                    Mother

6 Comments
Deb Day link
3/13/2017 08:21:20 pm

I really like your approach to this. The two-voice idea really works for this idea. And I loved the way you compared them in the short, to the point phrases. Nice job

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Kris Williams
3/13/2017 08:45:07 pm

What a wonderful idea for a post! It's a wonderful way to share your family!

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jsementelli link
3/13/2017 08:54:46 pm

I love this so much! Beautiful job!!

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Sallly
3/13/2017 09:40:38 pm

A perfect poetry form for your two aunts. And the matching dress with rik rak black and white photo is the perfect introduction. I'm always amazed at how much can be conveyed with less words in poems. I feel like I know these 2 amazing women! Thanks for sharing a glimpse of their life.

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Tammy Stoker
3/13/2017 09:45:06 pm

I loved learning about your mom and aunt through your very creative poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing lives of two important women in your life

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Laurie Pandorf link
3/13/2017 10:07:22 pm

Gorgeous poem, and great use of the two-voice for. I especially loved the part when you were aching to hear news from home. It just shows how hard it is to be obedient. The ending - Aunt/Mother is powerful. Thanks for sharing!

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    Brian Kissel is an Associate Professor of education at the University of North Carolina at Charlotte.  His focus is writing instruction.  He lives in North Carolina with his wife, Hattie and three kiddos: Charlie, Ben, and Harriet.
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